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Basilevs
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Travis Newbury
Basilevs wrote:
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Only commenting on what appeals to me, this photo just doesn't do it. I
think it has something to do with the rock. If it were just the green
plant I think it would be better.

Mind you this is coming from someone that took a picture of a wasp...


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Alan Meyer
Basilevs wrote:

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I like:

The spot of bright green color.

The shimmering water.

The ripples around the plant.

I dislike:

The dark reflection above the green leaves.
It looks like the famous bad portrait snapshots
that have a tree or telephone pole appearing
to grow out of the head of the subject.

The soft focus in the foreground.
It makes the foreground hard to figure out and
therefore distracting (to me anyway.)

The projections into the frame of the leaf on
the left and the other leaves at the bottom.
These too look distracting to me.

You've spotted and photographed an interesting
and colorful subject, but have not paid enough
attention to the surrounding image.

That's my two cents anyway.

Good luck with your photography.

Alan

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Richard H.
Alan Meyer wrote:
I like:
The spot of bright green color.
The shimmering water.
The ripples around the plant.


Agreed.

I dislike:
The dark reflection above the green leaves.
It looks like the famous bad portrait snapshots
that have a tree or telephone pole appearing
to grow out of the head of the subject.


ROFL! I think the dark shadows are fine, but their placement is a
problem, as you mention.


The soft focus in the foreground.
It makes the foreground hard to figure out and
therefore distracting (to me anyway.)


I like the soft focus in the foreground, and the rock gives depth to the
image; but the foreground is too prominent, making it less apparent that
the plant is the subject.

IMO, this is easily changed with cropping, perhaps in a vertical format
(e.g., from the top right corner down to the twig in the water, leaving
the foreground rock protruding into the lower left corner of the frame)


You've spotted and photographed an interesting
and colorful subject


Indeed, it's interesting to see the things that can become interesting
subjects. Thanks for sharing!

Cheers,
Richard

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Daniel
C'est un groupe fr. ce serait quand même bien d'y poster en français.
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Alan Meyer wrote:
I like:
The spot of bright green color.
The shimmering water.
The ripples around the plant.


Agreed.

I dislike:
The dark reflection above the green leaves.
It looks like the famous bad portrait snapshots
that have a tree or telephone pole appearing
to grow out of the head of the subject.


ROFL! I think the dark shadows are fine, but their placement is a
problem, as you mention.


The soft focus in the foreground.
It makes the foreground hard to figure out and
therefore distracting (to me anyway.)


I like the soft focus in the foreground, and the rock gives depth to
the

image; but the foreground is too prominent, making it less apparent
that

the plant is the subject.

IMO, this is easily changed with cropping, perhaps in a vertical
format

(e.g., from the top right corner down to the twig in the water,
leaving

the foreground rock protruding into the lower left corner of the
frame)



You've spotted and photographed an interesting
and colorful subject


Indeed, it's interesting to see the things that can become interesting
subjects. Thanks for sharing!

Cheers,
Richard



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Patrick
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Bonsoir,

Tant que durera la situation de la société, il convient de s'intéresser à
toutes les voies possibles. Dans le cas particulier de la sinistrose
contemporaine, on ne peut se passer de prendre en considération toutes les
problématiques possibles.
"Il n'y a pas de monogénisme déductif", pose Descartes. Le monogénisme
permet en effet de s'interroger sur une science morale en tant qu'objet
existentiel de la connaissance.
C'est ainsi que Nietzsche conteste l'analyse substantialiste du
monogénisme. Contrastons cependant ce raisonnement : s'il donne une
signification particulière à l'analyse spéculative du monogénisme, il est
nécessaire d'admettre qu'il en spécifie l'analyse déductive comme objet
rationnel de la connaissance, et le monogénisme ne se comprend d'ailleurs
qu'à la lueur du substantialisme universel !

Bon au moins c'est en francais !
Signé


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Daniel
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Bonsoir,

Tant que durera la situation de la société, il convient de
s'intéresser à

toutes les voies possibles. Dans le cas particulier de la sinistrose
contemporaine, on ne peut se passer de prendre en considération toutes
les

problématiques possibles.
"Il n'y a pas de monogénisme déductif", pose Descartes. Le
monogénisme

permet en effet de s'interroger sur une science morale en tant
qu'objet

existentiel de la connaissance.
C'est ainsi que Nietzsche conteste l'analyse substantialiste du
monogénisme. Contrastons cependant ce raisonnement : s'il donne une
signification particulière à l'analyse spéculative du monogénisme, il
est

nécessaire d'admettre qu'il en spécifie l'analyse déductive comme
objet

rationnel de la connaissance, et le monogénisme ne se comprend
d'ailleurs

qu'à la lueur du substantialisme universel !

Bon au moins c'est en francais !
Signé



Et lorsque l'on sait que le monogénisme est, en résumé, une doctrine
anthropologique selon laquelle toutes les race humaines dérivent d'un
type primitif commun. Et que spéculatif n'a pas tout à fait le même sens
que spéculum, tout s'éclaire subitement. ;o)))
Daniel


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Patrick
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http://www.photosight.ru/photo.php?photoid…6384&ref=author

Bonsoir,

Tant que durera la situation de la société, il convient de
s'intéresser à

toutes les voies possibles. Dans le cas particulier de la sinistrose
contemporaine, on ne peut se passer de prendre en considération toutes
les

problématiques possibles.
"Il n'y a pas de monogénisme déductif", pose Descartes. Le
monogénisme

permet en effet de s'interroger sur une science morale en tant
qu'objet

existentiel de la connaissance.
C'est ainsi que Nietzsche conteste l'analyse substantialiste du
monogénisme. Contrastons cependant ce raisonnement : s'il donne une
signification particulière à l'analyse spéculative du monogénisme, il
est

nécessaire d'admettre qu'il en spécifie l'analyse déductive comme
objet

rationnel de la connaissance, et le monogénisme ne se comprend
d'ailleurs

qu'à la lueur du substantialisme universel !

Bon au moins c'est en francais !
Signé



Et lorsque l'on sait que le monogénisme est, en résumé, une doctrine
anthropologique selon laquelle toutes les race humaines dérivent d'un
type primitif commun. Et que spéculatif n'a pas tout à fait le même sens
que spéculum, tout s'éclaire subitement. ;o)))
Daniel




Parfaitement exact !
;-)))



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Sheldon
"Travis Newbury" wrote in message
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Basilevs wrote:
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Only commenting on what appeals to me, this photo just doesn't do it. I
think it has something to do with the rock. If it were just the green
plant I think it would be better.

I agree. If there was some way to just get the plant completely surrounded

by water it would have had more impact. The rock is distracting. A little
Photoshop, maybe? Take away the rock and I find it quite interesting.


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Frank ess
"Travis Newbury" wrote in message
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Basilevs wrote:
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Only commenting on what appeals to me, this photo just doesn't do
it. I
think it has something to do with the rock. If it were just the
green
plant I think it would be better.



Seems to me you are right.

I like what it evokes—water, earth, life, motion—but not what it
shows. Could the same evocation be made without the intereference of
the rock, or does the rock evoke what the artist wanted: difficulty in
approaching the greener, livelier, sweeter moments ...

Who knows?


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Crownfield
Frank ess wrote:

"Travis Newbury" wrote in message
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Basilevs wrote:
http://www.photosight.ru/photo.php?photoid…6384&ref=author


Only commenting on what appeals to me, this photo just doesn't do
it. I
think it has something to do with the rock. If it were just the
green
plant I think it would be better.



Seems to me you are right.

I like what it evokes—water, earth, life, motion—but not what it
shows. Could the same evocation be made without the intereference of
the rock, or does the rock evoke what the artist wanted: difficulty in
approaching the greener, livelier, sweeter moments ...

Who knows?


try
http://www.vircen.com/rpd/index.cgi?mode=album&album=./composition
perhaps just a crop would help, and unsharp mask.


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Frank ess




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